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思路是对得,白衣紫蟒略宽,提供几个词参考一下,赤胆,紫气,红粉,
第二联,出句的范围很小,而对句的范围很大,
相比之下,落差悬殊,整体...
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对句流畅,白衣,乌雀,略宽
潜力股
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对仗没有问题。出句,春不到,对句燕来了?似乎有些不妥。
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