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七律.望黄山毛峰 |
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总领介绍黄山,点题!
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天孙,是指织女星吧?
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黄山毛峰是茶而非峰,因白毫披身,芽尖似峰,取名"毛峰",后冠以地名为"黄山毛峰"。个见,中二联似游离题外,主题感觉有些松散。
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我来到这里观日出,不谈酒,只论茶,心中特别快乐!
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