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扣题步韵圆润
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双嵌名,版名,诗友名,且得意境,高妙!
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好结,恭谦喜庆,雅致!
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我年纪一大把,有时候还会很幼稚,就怪我太单纯了像个上帝。从小读三国演义,战略分析成习惯了。 可是我没有怪文化大革命,尽管是文化大革命耽误的我
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