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沉香居 悟到无心便是禅
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妙联也!开头的“四野”可否把“四”字换成不是数目字的字?
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此联大妙!实非等闲之辈手笔!大大的赞一个!
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很妙!只是,上联中间的“层叠”,平水韵里,是平声呢还是仄声?如果是新韵,也就无事。
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