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好的,若初兄! 遥握!
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其实后二句是早醒前梦里写的,所以标上(梦作),前二句是醒后写的。四句都是早上完成的,没害怕。
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据说蒲老先生就是位廪生。呵呵,杨朱此想法不自量力了,呵呵!
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呵呵,同意!
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嗯,好的!
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