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谢谢花开
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斟空往事何从忆【陌上花开】
写尽相思独自伤【小梦】
伤心聊把盏【小梦】
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关于落花,个人觉得声音不大。盼月圆不一定有月。结合上句看,把场景设在夜间略有不妥
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“书~语”一联出对都好,但更适应于题赠联。
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